It's not right to be strict with children (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

It is undoubtedly that there are people who are sure that it is wrong to be strict with children, while others have a completely opposite opinion concerning that topic, and it quite often serves as reason of fierce disputes between the people who maintain such contrary opinions.

As for me, a person must have, first of all, a sense of proportion to raise their child or children the proper way. Firstly, there are a lot of examples of disregard or, conversely, too rigid relationships between parents and their offsprings which did good to neither of sides. Needless to say, such kind of upbringing usually leads to rather bad consequences. Secondly, the disregard upbringing, in reverse, can make child lax over any measure and make him or her become dissolute.

However, it is strict upbringing which happens to have its advantages. For instance, it makes youngsters more exactive to themselves. Moreover, it also develops a rather strong force of will and persistence which would eventually be of a great help in their future career. Such children have big chances to go far in their life when then grow up, so the strict upbringing is superior to its opposite by any rate.

Albeit the above-mentioned, it is still mostly considered that parents should regard to their children with a cross between harsh and soft upbringing.

To sum up, I would like to emphasize that children should be treated with patience and fairness, and there must be a golden mean in their upbringing. Their parents must have a delicate sense of measure and be strict or gentle with their children if need be.