It’s not right to be strict with little children. (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

Strictness… There are different points of view on this matter. Some people say that such living conditions help parents to temper their children whereas others believe children must grow up in an atmosphere of tolerance and love.

As far as I am concerned, strictness is blessing in disguise. To begin with, a child brought up in strictness learns to obey the orders from above which can be a good professional trait. Moreover, children learn to be leaders by the example of members of their families who guide them in their lives. In addition, children would not learn what it means to be spoiled if they work a lot.

In contrast, there is an opinion that being strict with little children is not always right as a child brought up in rigor can hardly express the tender feelings of love or joy as they have never done so before.

Then, such people also admit that unreasonable strictness can leave a mark on children' mental or physical health which would be not so easy to deal with in the future or even in childhood.

In fact, I cannot agree with them because strictness helps parents raise up an enterprising child who will find it difficult to stay inactive. Actually, severity helps children to learn how to behave according to a certain order. However, the results of such upbringing depend on the character traits of the child.

In conclusion, I would like to state that it is right to be strict with little children since they are more likely to develop an ability to concentrate at a single business in order to finish it properly and to work on the job with high personal responsibility.