1/ It is not right to be strict with little children 2. Fashionable clothes people are wearing can influence their behaviour (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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Nowadays, the problem of parenting is very pronounced. Some people believe that it is not right to be strict with little children while others think that children must be brought up in strictness.

In my personal opinion, it is not right to be strict with little children. To start with, I would like to say that children should be brought up in love and care because only in this way they can become worthy and kind people. Furthermore, if parents always scold their children, then children will be afraid of them, and in the future they will hate parents.

However, many people think that children must be brought up in strictness.

They consider that children in childhood should begin to respect their parents. Also, they think that respect can only be achieved through rigor and cruelty.

Despite all my respect to my opponents’ opinion, I do not find their arguments convincing enough. Children undoubtedly must respect their children, but parents should achieve respect for their children through care, and not through severity and punishment.

In conclusion, I would like to say that the problem of parenting is still to be discussed.

But for now, I will stay with my opinion, and I will say that it is not right to be strict with little children.

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Nowadays, the problem of fashion is very pronounced. Some people believe fashionable clothes people are wearing can influence their behaviour while others think that fashionable clothes do not affect people’s behaviour.

In my personal opinion, fashionable clothes that people are wearing can influence their behaviour. To start with, I would like to say that people who wear fashionable and expensive clothes may think that because of it they are something better than other people. Furthermore, fashion clothes cost a lot of money therefore people who have the opportunity to buy it may think that they are better than others.

However, many people think that fashionable clothes do not affect people’s behaviour. They consider that each person will behave as he used to despite fashionable clothes.

Despite all my respect to my opponents’ opinion, I do not find their arguments convincing enough. People who wear fashionable clothes for the first time may begin to think that now they have the right to consider themselves better than others, and this is wrong.

In conclusion, I would like to say that the problem of fashion is still to be discussed.

ut for now, I will stay with my opinion, and I will say that fashionable clothes that people are wearing can influence their behaviour.