Lots of teens believe that it is important to look nice (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

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Lots of teens believe that it is important to look nice. However, adults often think that young people pay too much attention to their appearance and fashion.

What is your opinion? Do you care what you wear?

The question of the role of fashion in teenagers` life has been widely debated in recent years. Some people believe that youngsters devote a lot of their attention and time to their clothes and appearance, while others disagree with this view.

I think that many teenagers really pay too much attention to fashion. Firstly, they constantly follow fashion trends in magazines and on the Internet. Secondly, teenagers buy a lot of things that quickly go out of fashion and are thrown away. Finally, youngsters use a lot of makeup to look like a glossy magazine model.

However, some people think that teenagers do not pay enough attention to their appearance.

In their view, life of adolescents is completely occupied with study and there is not enough time to study fashion trends. Moreover, fashionable clothes are very expensive and not everyone can afford it.

Personally, I do not agree with the above opinion. Many teens spend more time in front of a mirror than in class. In addition, now there are many inexpensive clothing brands that many people can afford.

In conclusion, although there are different opinions on this problem, I still believe that it is important to look nice for teens. A beautiful appearance helps teenagers feel more confident among their peers.