Pushing children to achieve robs them of their childhood пример 2 (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

Nowadays there are different points of view on making children achieve goals. Some people think that forcing youngster to attain to success might steal their childhood. Others, on the contrary, claim that it is important to motivate children to put effort in their occupations. Let me express my own opinion.

To my mind, children need some pressure from their parents. First of all, it allows them to become hardworking from young ages. It's necessary quality in the modern competitive world. Moreover, children can develop their talents more efficiently thanks to the support of parents. Also some activities may be not only requiring hard work and attention, but exciting, so youngsters will easily enjoy them.

However, there are people who have the opposing opinion.

They believe that pressure leaves children no time to play and just get pleasure from carefree existence. What is more, they think that parents often use descendants as a tool for realizing their own ambitions or making a fortune. And then children might grow into unhappy adults.

Nevertheless, I disagree with these statements. I suppose parents can find a balance between pushing youngsters to the achievements and letting enjoy their lives. And I am sure that adults can stimulate children with their own consent and desire.

In conclusion, I would like to say that parental pressure can be effective and beneficial for children to succeed and reach high results in life. And also there is enough time to work, study and play, enjoy live.