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The circus is the best entertainment for kids (Сочинения ЕГЭ английский язык)

The problem of entertainment due to the circus has always aroused sharp debates. Nowadays a great number of people claim that a circus is the best way to amuse children. However, others have quite a different point of view. I think this problem is really worth discussing.

As for me, I support the second opinion and have several reasons to prove it. To start with, children usually sit at shows practically without real activity. Scientist have proved that being in a sitting position for their a long time harms children’a health. In opinion, it is better to choose active relaxation. In addition, children are very susceptible at their age. Failed tricks or cruelty to animal can spoil the mood and have a bad effect on the child’s psyche.

Moreover, clowns of a circus sometimes interact with public. A child may be frightened by a stranger and start screaming that will disrupt the performance.

Nevertheless, there are people think in a different way. They claim that a circus is a cheap and available way to amuse children.

Though I respect this point of view, I definitely cannot share it. I am absolutely sure that there are a lot of kinds of entertainments good for children. For example, it can be a cinema, an amusement park or a rink. In addition, an entrance is free.

In conclusion, I would like to stress that in spite of the fact how many points of view concerning this problem may be, I still stand my ground that a circus is not the best way to amuse children.

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